Thursday, September 20, 2012

Computer Software Gone Wrong Story

So this is a short story I wrote. Enjoy the first part ;)

Part 1:

Austin's heart raced as he bolted across the streets of New York City. As he took a glimpse of his pursuer, the people around him started to fade away. The buildings around him started to close in until Austin was in a narrow alley. A wall came into view and Austin screeched to a stop. He turned around slowly to take a look at his hunter. It was a large stainless steel Whirlpool Gold refrigerator with gleaming bloodshot eyes. The legs looked like miniature, titanium tanks. It was an armless machine. The refrigerator heaved its foot directly over Austin and was ready to crush him.


xD yes, I know it was very short...it was like that because I wanted the part to end with a cliff hanger and if Ii continue on with the story, it wouldn't be so for a while..


I would post part 2 some other day.


~Jeff~


What do you think would happen next? Comment it! :D


Hint: The story is just getting started :0



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